Drabblish things
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elabyAh, internets! I have barely known thee for the whole of November, and I have missed thee!
Someday, I swear, I'll catch up on all the wonderful things you lot have posted in the past month and which I've tagged "to read". But Nano is over, and Yuletide is looming (holycrap, how many days do I have left? O_O), and I'm back fresh from the far reaches of Michigan with new fandoms pinging around in my brain.
As our mission when visiting![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
_melisande_ was to do everything possible to give her a break from schoolwork, we watched a lot of television. And, I hardly need say as it's _melisande_ we're talking about, it was mind-bogglingly awesome television.
I now have under my belt:
- All four seasons of the new Doctor Who
- The first season of Rome
- The first season of Torchwood, plus a disc or two of the second season
We didn't watch all of this over Thanksgiving (I'm not sure we were there for as many hours as that would take XD) but we did finish several milestones: the last episodes of season four of Doctor Who (which means I'm caught up with everything released outside the UK!), the last episodes of Rome's first season, and the last episodes of Torchwood's first season. I feel a great deal less frightened of being spoiled by the internets now, although that doesn't mean I'm going to go recklessly wandering around. There's still a whole season of Torchwood to see, not to mention the miniseries, and another season of Rome, and season five of Doctor Who, whenever that comes out over here.
But anyway! I am sated with ridiculously good storytelling and characters and dialogue and OMFG I love television. And in commemoration, I wrote two thingies. One is a double drabble for Rome, and the other is... I don't know what you'd call 250 words, but it's Doctor Who. I wanted to do one for Torchwood, but I find that I am not yet good enough to come up with the kind of lines worthy of Jack Harkness.
Fandom: Rome
Characters: Pullo
Words: 200
Warnings: Spoilers up through episode 11, "The Spoils," the second-to-last episode of season one.
When Titus Pullo awoke, there was not an inch of him that didn't hurt. He didn't understand why he had woken up at all; he should be dead. Death, he thought, couldn't possibly be this painful, so alive it was, then.
The last thing he remembered had been a dream. He was in the arena, blood in his eyes so he could barely see, blood pumping so violently through his heart he was sure it would burst. And then it did, because Vorenus was in the arena with him, shouting thirteen in answer to his own. It had been a dream, and a very cruel one: Vorenus never would come to his aid now. Not after what Pullo had done to him.
He opened his eyes and the blurry ceiling looked frighteningly familiar, and he suddenly became aware of the smell of bread: Niobe's bread. Nobody else he knew made it like that, with fennel. Somewhere to his right there was the rumble of a masculine voice he would have recognized in death's river itself. But life opened its arms to him now, all bleakness gone with that voice, and the dream was no longer a torment, but a treasure.
Fandom: Doctor Who
Characters: The Doctor, Donna
Words: 250
Warnings: Reference to "The Parting of the Ways" (not sure I'd call it spoilers, as it doesn't exactly tell you much). Set sometime in the fourth season.
The Doctor was wedged in an open compartment in the TARDIS's floor, his yellow trainers propped directly in front of him and one elbow between his knees. With that hand, he held open a hinged panel, and with the other, his sonic screwdriver. His glasses had slid down, so he'd tilted his head back in order to see the contents of the panel. He put his tongue between his lips.
Footsteps sounded on the floor above, and a fall of red hair came into his vision, followed by a curious face.
"What in heaven's name are you doing down there?" Donna asked conversationally.
"Chameleon circuit," he said. "Needs to be fixed. Everybody knows the blue police box by now. They see it and hear vworp vworp and I might as well hang a neon sign on the front saying 'Here's the Doctor.' Defeats the purpose of camouflage, don't you think?"
Donna put her head to one side thoughtfully. "I rather like it."
"You may, but it's not practical when there's folks about trying to kill you."
Donna hunkered down. "You do realize that, on occasion, people are very glad indeed to see this blue police box?"
The Doctor blinked at her.
Donna stared back in disbelief. "For all your cleverness, you are terribly stupid sometimes. Get out of there; something's blinking on the console."
Later - after the Medusa Cascade - he knew how to fix the chameleon circuit. Donna had given him that. But he didn't. And he wouldn't.
Why the heck do I have no Doctor Who icons? This one will have to do as a Rome substitute *pets Saturninus*
Someday, I swear, I'll catch up on all the wonderful things you lot have posted in the past month and which I've tagged "to read". But Nano is over, and Yuletide is looming (holycrap, how many days do I have left? O_O), and I'm back fresh from the far reaches of Michigan with new fandoms pinging around in my brain.
As our mission when visiting
_melisande_ was to do everything possible to give her a break from schoolwork, we watched a lot of television. And, I hardly need say as it's _melisande_ we're talking about, it was mind-bogglingly awesome television.I now have under my belt:
- All four seasons of the new Doctor Who
- The first season of Rome
- The first season of Torchwood, plus a disc or two of the second season
We didn't watch all of this over Thanksgiving (I'm not sure we were there for as many hours as that would take XD) but we did finish several milestones: the last episodes of season four of Doctor Who (which means I'm caught up with everything released outside the UK!), the last episodes of Rome's first season, and the last episodes of Torchwood's first season. I feel a great deal less frightened of being spoiled by the internets now, although that doesn't mean I'm going to go recklessly wandering around. There's still a whole season of Torchwood to see, not to mention the miniseries, and another season of Rome, and season five of Doctor Who, whenever that comes out over here.
But anyway! I am sated with ridiculously good storytelling and characters and dialogue and OMFG I love television. And in commemoration, I wrote two thingies. One is a double drabble for Rome, and the other is... I don't know what you'd call 250 words, but it's Doctor Who. I wanted to do one for Torchwood, but I find that I am not yet good enough to come up with the kind of lines worthy of Jack Harkness.
Fandom: Rome
Characters: Pullo
Words: 200
Warnings: Spoilers up through episode 11, "The Spoils," the second-to-last episode of season one.
When Titus Pullo awoke, there was not an inch of him that didn't hurt. He didn't understand why he had woken up at all; he should be dead. Death, he thought, couldn't possibly be this painful, so alive it was, then.
The last thing he remembered had been a dream. He was in the arena, blood in his eyes so he could barely see, blood pumping so violently through his heart he was sure it would burst. And then it did, because Vorenus was in the arena with him, shouting thirteen in answer to his own. It had been a dream, and a very cruel one: Vorenus never would come to his aid now. Not after what Pullo had done to him.
He opened his eyes and the blurry ceiling looked frighteningly familiar, and he suddenly became aware of the smell of bread: Niobe's bread. Nobody else he knew made it like that, with fennel. Somewhere to his right there was the rumble of a masculine voice he would have recognized in death's river itself. But life opened its arms to him now, all bleakness gone with that voice, and the dream was no longer a torment, but a treasure.
Fandom: Doctor Who
Characters: The Doctor, Donna
Words: 250
Warnings: Reference to "The Parting of the Ways" (not sure I'd call it spoilers, as it doesn't exactly tell you much). Set sometime in the fourth season.
The Doctor was wedged in an open compartment in the TARDIS's floor, his yellow trainers propped directly in front of him and one elbow between his knees. With that hand, he held open a hinged panel, and with the other, his sonic screwdriver. His glasses had slid down, so he'd tilted his head back in order to see the contents of the panel. He put his tongue between his lips.
Footsteps sounded on the floor above, and a fall of red hair came into his vision, followed by a curious face.
"What in heaven's name are you doing down there?" Donna asked conversationally.
"Chameleon circuit," he said. "Needs to be fixed. Everybody knows the blue police box by now. They see it and hear vworp vworp and I might as well hang a neon sign on the front saying 'Here's the Doctor.' Defeats the purpose of camouflage, don't you think?"
Donna put her head to one side thoughtfully. "I rather like it."
"You may, but it's not practical when there's folks about trying to kill you."
Donna hunkered down. "You do realize that, on occasion, people are very glad indeed to see this blue police box?"
The Doctor blinked at her.
Donna stared back in disbelief. "For all your cleverness, you are terribly stupid sometimes. Get out of there; something's blinking on the console."
Later - after the Medusa Cascade - he knew how to fix the chameleon circuit. Donna had given him that. But he didn't. And he wouldn't.
Why the heck do I have no Doctor Who icons? This one will have to do as a Rome substitute *pets Saturninus*
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Date: 2009-12-02 01:51 am (UTC)AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW OMG CUTE DOCTOR AND DONNA AND I LOVE YOU!!! Vworp! That's the noise! OMG MARRY MEEEE again!!!!!!!!
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Date: 2009-12-02 02:10 am (UTC)You make me so happy with your commenks!
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Date: 2009-12-02 02:28 am (UTC)*EXTREME wibble*
*falls all to bits*
That...the Rome...the last line...verily, thou hast melted me entire, Elaby my love. And I have no idea where the Elizabethan English came from, except that you gorbled my brain so utterly that I didn't have much say in the matter, and Shakespearean is apparently my default setting. But oh honey it's gorgeous. The fennel was one of those little details that's SO worth it, even in a fixed-word situation, because it adds so much to the immediacy and the real-ness and is just so right, but of course it's the emotion that made this drouble so wonderful. And the last name needs mentioning again, because GUH. So.good.
I am unforgivably unschooled in Dr. Who, but I do love the line For all your cleverness, you are terribly stupid sometimes, for applying to so many well-beloved characters of mine. And it's a sesquidrouble!
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Date: 2009-12-02 03:38 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-12-03 01:32 am (UTC)The last line was like a gift from the gods. I wrote it and went "whoa, where'd that come from? I don't care! Yay!"
*glomps you*
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Date: 2009-12-03 01:39 am (UTC)Bwee, I love that feeling!! The times when the words are just THERE is the best thing in the world, so far's I'm concerned.
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Date: 2009-12-02 06:01 am (UTC)My favorite parts from each:
He opened his eyes and the blurry ceiling looked frighteningly familiar, and he suddenly became aware of the smell of bread: Niobe's bread. Nobody else he knew made it like that, with fennel. Somewhere to his right there was the rumble of a masculine voice he would have recognized in death's river itself.
Ohhhhhh. *weak*
The Doctor was wedged in an open compartment in the TARDIS's floor, his yellow trainers propped directly in front of him and one elbow between his knees. With that hand, he held open a hinged panel, and with the other, his sonic screwdriver. His glasses had slid down, so he'd tilted his head back in order to see the contents of the panel. He put his tongue between his lips.
I can so see it. :)
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Date: 2009-12-03 01:25 am (UTC)The Doctor is SO awesome. Especially the Tenth Doctor. He does things just like that all the time, with the contortion and the being adorable XD
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Date: 2009-12-02 05:46 pm (UTC)<3
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Date: 2009-12-03 01:26 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-12-02 10:56 pm (UTC)Welcome back to the internets! They have missed you!
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Date: 2009-12-03 03:00 pm (UTC)I've read them both like a million times and they just get better and better which is incredible because they were so fantastic the first time around.
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Date: 2009-12-03 10:32 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-04-24 02:44 am (UTC)Also, also! So, I was watching through season 3 the first time around, right. The episode with Shakespeare. And it got to the bit with Will hitting on the Doctor, and naturally I squee'd for reasons of geekery and slash. And THEN it got to the next line--"Fifty-seven academics just punched the air"--and I screeched "FINALLY I UNDERSTAND!!" and then squee'd some more and basically dissolved into giggles for minutes on end thinking of you, acushla :) As a matter of fact, I've been having the worst desire to change my journal title to "This is my timey-wimey detector. It goes 'ding' when there's stuff," because Ten FTW, y/y?
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Date: 2010-04-25 03:26 pm (UTC)and I screeched "FINALLY I UNDERSTAND!!"
\o/ *air fists of victory!* Wahaha, YAY XD That makes me so happy! My friend who showed us Who in the first place showed me this episode with that line in mind because she thought I'd love it so much. And I did XD
because Ten FTW, y/y?
Oh so VERY y! You should totally change your journal title to that, because it's an AWESOME line XD